having a flair for economics and accounting i have decided that i want a degree in accounting and finance or management. the many brilliant representatives of the management community around the world have strengthened that resolve.

when i worked in my school as a tutor of english as a second language for students from a community school in muscat, i realized the importance of a strong leader who could organize, command respect, and be able to work well with others. these ideas were further enforced by my month long internship at novartis pharmaceutical (accounts and finance department and human resources department).

i attended the harvard model congress in paris and won the award of distinction. one skill in particular that contributed to this award was my confident public speaking.

the last 4 months have been crucial in my learning of real world business and economics. for my ib extended essay, titled “to what extent does subway in oman operate as an oligopoly”, i set out to prove the oligpolistic structure of the fast food market in oman. in this effort, i have come across many real life complexities in pricing behaviour, profit making and other aspects of the theory of the firm. while attempting to explain these alternate theories of firms i have developed a keen interest in analyzing and understanding how the world of business works.

after an undergraduate degree in accounting and finance or management i plan to go onto post graduate studies and work on an mba. a strong performance in a ba will allow me to move onto an mba and only then shall i be satisfied.

for the last four years i have been part of our schools volleyball team ice. we have retained our isac (inter schools activities conference, middle east) title for four years. playing in the power hitters (spiker) position requires immense physical fitness and to accomplish that i regularly go to the gym for fitness training. i am also part of my school track and field team. being the fastest sprinter in the school since 11th grade the 100m, 200m and 400m races are my specialty even though i still pursue long distance running. in my spare time i explore and master the computer as i am conversant with a visual basic programming course. it is imperative for me to have the latest hardware and software and i make it a point to install everything myself. i also learn urdu as it is my native tongue and a link to my culture, to maintain that is crucial.

living in a diverse international community of over 52 nationalities has allowed to me recognize and appreciate different cultures. with the experience i have and the strong motivation to craft a bright future i feel i can justify my decision to pursue a career in accounting and finance or management.

去英国留学申请书篇2

写好英国留学文书第一招：正确使用英文

好的英国留学申请文书必须使用正确的英文。录取委员会的教授只能从书面材料来对你的学识、人品和语言能力进行判断，而你也只能以书面的形式来表现和证明你自己。你和他们之间唯一的媒介是文字。你的雅思成绩也许很高，但试想你的personal statement写得一塌糊涂，洋教授们会怎么想？毕竟这种文件是在没有严格时间限制的情况下写的，如果质量差，人家对你英语语言能力的印象就会打折扣，认为你是一个高分低能的人，一定要把自己的形象表现得鲜明、具体和个性化，给自己一个独特的包装。

写好英国留学文书第二招：全面展示自己

可以说，申请文书相当于不见面的interview。你要通过这些文件，让教授们了解你过去的成就、现在的能力和未来的打算。但仅仅这些并不够。你还要告诉他们你是在什么样的情况下取得这样的成就的，是什么原因使你像你所声称的那样杰出以及你为什么想深造。如果你曾遭受什么重大的失败、挫折或失望，你需要对这些做出合理的解释。

这些文件还得展示你的性格和人格力量。要尽量写得生动、具体，让教授们读了以后好像已经见过你本人一样。

写好英国留学文书第三招：知晓会被提问的问题

由于学校的类型，选择的科系以及所选学校的威望，入学委员会将会阅读成千上万的个人资料，为了让你的文章有说服力，令人难忘和个性突出，他们到底要得到什么信息？问题涉及的范围是什么？申请涉及的问题范围极广，从人际方面怎样的挑战使你认为它们锻炼出你解决矛盾的能力和管理方面的技巧，到一些不定性的乌龙问题，除了邮递问卷之外，大部分的学校通常会提供回答问题的指导，请仔细地按部就班，不要偏离它们。

在申请文档中避免不同部分之间的冗长重复，不要只在行文间陈述你的平均绩点和课程，这些东西在申请中是会被予以与其他部分相当的重视，然而如果你认为平均绩点和课程有所需解释之处则不妨多写一些，比如说，你可以讲明某一些平均绩点的不定是因为生病或是家庭问题所致，除了这些情况，千万别为你的分数找理由，入学委员会每年都要读过成百上千个这样的理由。

写好英国留学文书第四招：全面了解所申请的学校

（1）研究你所申请的英国大学。大部分学校会给你提供一本小册子告诉你校方对申请者的要求。与该所学校的研究生和你所知的就读该校的人交谈，充分利用学校的校友会组织与研究生们建立关系，与学校通电话，和入学委员会成员或其他校方官员联系，你了解该所学校和它的运作以及职能成员愈多，你愈可能写好你的申请书以此证明你对该所学校确实十分地感兴趣。

（2）另外，你得花费时间给读信者一种印象：你花了更多的时间使自己对该所学校了解得比其他的申请者更透彻，这些特别功夫使读信人对你的勤奋，专心致志和对该院系的兴趣有着十分良好的印象。这些特别了解和信息不必在每一句中提出，也无须特别夸张其辞，你的陈述只需包含足够的信息使人留下你做了特别努力的印象即可。

写好英国留学文书第五招：不同的学校写不同的个人陈述

一旦你认识到进行个人陈述的目的所在，你必须关注行文的类型和结构，以便最有效地达到目的。脑子里有了这样的认识，就会意识到没有一个完美的个人陈述能适合你所申请的那些学校提出的问题，大部分学校对于他们所希望录取的人要求不同，你必须根据申请文件中提出的问题来“量体裁衣”，理想的方法是：针对不同的学校写不同的个人陈述。

去英国留学申请书篇3

问：

英国留学申请书怎么写才能吸引人？

答：

一份完整的出国留学申请书，一定要说明自己申请该学校的原因，拿英国名校萨里大学为例：

1、展现出你对萨里大学的热爱

讲出热爱它的原因。你为什么要申请萨里大学啊？你觉得它的哪一点深深吸引你？是课程设施，文化特色，地理位置，师资、历史还是其他什么？

2、告诉对方你为什么适合这个学校

是因为萨里大学的特色与你的个人发展相契合吗？是你想通过在萨里大学的学习经历提升你哪方面的才能吗？

3、用案例证明自己符合它的招生要求

比如你的语言成绩，你的专业技能，你的过往经验等，尤其是那些跨专业申请的同学，一定要说明为什么你符合这个专业的招生要求。

附：英国留学申请书写作要领

以上三点是必须记住的要领，那么出国留学申请书的具体操作步骤有哪些呢？

1）材料完备

这些材料的准备根据三个要点来，包括你对什么课程感兴趣，你的个人长处和相关工作经验有哪些，你有哪些兴趣爱好，以及，你毕业后想做什么样的`工作？你选择的课程会对你以后的工作有哪些帮助等。

2）格式规范

将陈述分为三段，用前言、中段、结论的结构将你的想法阐述清楚、明了。

3）语言简洁

ps的语言切忌口语化，也不能用英语之外的其他语言，必须保证语言的规范。尽量以最简洁的语句陈述。

4）切忌抄袭

这一点无需多说，ps是展示自我特色的途径，绝对不能抄袭他人。

5）时间充足

一篇优秀的出国留学申请书并非一蹴而就的，它应该是在你通过叫充足的时间准备、充足的时间组织语言、充足的时间调整结构之后完成的。

6）内容结合申请专业展开

写作留学申请书的时候，一定要结合自己的申请专业，尽量围绕专业申请要求展开。

7）逻辑清晰

以上出国留学申请书写作要点，适用于很多大学。当然，如果申请的大学有特殊的要求，也务必要按照学校的要求展开书写。

去英国留学申请书篇4

问：

如何写好英国留学申请书？

答：

很多学生的个人陈述设计是非常失败的，他们的思路是典型的中国思维，在文书写作上往往是大而全，希望在申请文书中体现自身所有的内容。故此，无论是小时候的把一分钱交给警察叔叔的经历，还是大学抗洪救灾，都会一股脑的往上放，这使得文章整体的布局出现严重的思路不突出，内容不鲜明的特点。其实，申请人为什么不“换位思考”，看看录取委员会想要什么呢？如果自己是录取委员会的一员，期待着学生的文书是什么样子？到底是一个宽泛的自述，还是针对专业的一个有针对性的个人表达？其实，个人陈述就是一个围绕专业的表达，录取委员会感兴趣的就是和专业有关的内容，至于其他的内容并不是他们所关心的。一个学习计算机的学生，他的计算能力和编程经验，录取委员会会非常感兴趣，至于他参加抗洪救灾没有，除非是他参与了抗洪救灾的计算机程序设计，录取委员就不会太感冒了。故此，个人陈述的整体布局要以录取委员会的喜好作为基础，录取委员会希望看什么，就写什么，如果没有兴趣的，就不要花任何力气去写了，这一点来说非常重要。

如何让使馆的工作人员看着舒服，不要花哨，但是要方便清晰，这个就是做材料。学校要求申请人提供文书材料，初衷还是想了解学生是什么样的人。尽管目前很多国内申请人为了上名校而一味地追求所谓的精英意识，在文书中夸大个人经历。但是对于绝大多数国外大学而言，学校最希望看到的还是学生能够通过4年的学习，成为一个真正的人，能够对社会有所贡献的人，而不是一群能够讲大话的毕业生。

对于留学申请书而言，有几点是必须要写的，例如自我介绍，说明自己的在学情况；决定留学的起因，为什么会选择这个国家，对这个国家的初步认识；专业的选择，学习什么专业以及学习这个专业的理由；父母或留学经费人对自己留学想法的支持和理解；出国留学后的打算；入学后的学习态度。写清楚了这些事情，才能让翻阅文书的人对你的印象深刻，加深对你的印象。

写留学申请书其实并不难，难的是我们如何改变自己的思维方式，把留学的理由考虑并写的充分，如何能让学校对你的申请书印象深刻，这才是写留学申请书要注意的。

去英国留学申请书篇5

i should like to apply for one of the scholarships that your department may be offering to students from other countries. would you please send me the necessary application forms and any further details about the scholarships.

i am a postgraduate student in beijing science and engineering university. i major in microelectronics engineering, and do some research work during my study years. i hope to have a further study and continue to do my research work if i succeed in obtaining the engineering scholarship.

enclosed please find two letters of recommendation and my score report card. thank you for your consideration. i look forward to your reply.

respectfully yours.

li ming

去英国留学申请书篇6

dearx university teachers,

hello!

my name is yu, female, 17 years old, is a student of science class 1 in themiddle school affiliated to northwest university.

i am a lively person, i always like to get together with my classmates totalk about the big and small things around me, and also discuss some verycomplicated problems, but more is to imagine the future together, whenever thistime we will laugh very happy. in fact, i am a girl who likes to smile, becausei firmly believe that smile can bring happiness to my friends, and i alsoharvest happiness at the same time. so i love to laugh, even in the face ofsetbacks also choose to use this attitude to meet, in order to give themselvesmore confidence. that is because i love to laugh, my classmates sometimes saythat i am like a fool, but i never mind, because i hope my friends arehappy.

in my study, i have a correct attitude. i once served as a member of thelearning committee and a representative of chinese class, and have won manyhonors. in my life, because of my smile, i became more united with myclassmates. therefore, i always served as the monitor in primary school. after iwas promoted to senior grade, i began to serve as the brigade committee andleader. for many years, i won the honors of "three good students" and "excellentclass cadres". these honors are unforgettable in my life

they are teachers and schools' affirmation of my study and work, and theyhave always inspired me to move forward. but i have never been so proud, butwith a grateful heart, thank my teachers always care about me, love me; thankthe teacher for the honor, let me see the value of their efforts; thank you forteaching me how to be an upright person.

my favorite sport is swimming, i think in the water can make my mind moreclear, so whether it is hot summer or cold winter, as long as i have theopportunity to soak in the water. i also like to listen to music and have a widerange of interests, from popular music to symphonies. the reason why i likelistening to music is probably because i think it can calm my heart.

i always use it to relieve my stress when i fail in the exam or have trouble.i also like to write essays and graffiti, to write and draw my happiness orunhappiness, and sometimes write an article filled with indignation to commenton the current news and some social phenomena.

i think i'm a playful person, but i'm still serious about my study. i feelthat i am a more self-control person, know when to learn, also know thatlearning can not be distracted, and can abide by it. but i don't think i'm whatpeople usually call a "nerd" -- i just concentrate on my study and don't payattention to communicating with others.

so i have a lot of friends, we study together, also agreed to work towardsthe goal. at the same time, my outgoing personality naturally makes me have astrong curiosity and desire to explore the outside world, which also makes myvision more open. the bigger i grow and the more i know, the stronger my desireto explore is. it drives me to "attack" the unknown world. at the same time, ialso gain the happiness of learning.

every day i go to school, i have to go through the west power. there are manytrees in the campus. i can often smell the fragrance of green trees and grass.the simple teaching building beside makes the campus more elegant. as time goesby, i have a strong interest in the university which stands in the middle of thetrouble but can keep its original flavor. later, i began to look at thexuniversity information.

i know that if i set a goal, i have to work hard for it, otherwise everythingwill be in vain, but sometimes i will be full of imagination about universitylife: i imagine the happiness of living with my classmates in university;imagine the learning atmosphere when discussing problems with professors;imagine the rich and colorful social practice activities... and now, for my goaland all the beautiful things i fantasize about, i have to study harder.

but among many excellent students, i often feel powerless, even inferior,which is one of my major shortcomings. but in the process of growing up, i havebeen trying to overcome it, and i also realize that only down-to-earth, hardwork is the way to success.

i'm walking on this road now. although it's hard, i'm willing to enjoy it. ibelieve that since i am destined to be with you every dayx if i pass by, i willstep into the gate that i have been longing for for a long time in the nearfuture with a grateful heart.

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